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12月 6, 2020 1:53 上午 #2221waqi Winston参与者
This handout will help you write and revise the personal statement required by many graduate programs, internships, and special academic programs.
12月 15, 2020 11:12 上午 #2990Ivy Huang参与者
Since the application essay may have a critical impact on your career development, you should spend a lot of time, thought and effort on it, rather than the usual brief proposal. It should reflect how you are achieving your career goals, why the program is ideal for you, and what you bring to the program. Don’t make this a deadline assignment-now is the time to write, read, rewrite, write to a reader, and revise again until the paper is clear, concise, and compelling. Please read this link carefully on how to write better application essays.
12月 15, 2020 5:41 下午 #3044Jeffery Fu参与者
When we apply for the graduate university, it is a very significant requirements to write an application essay.
1. Begin by addressing your cover letter.
2. Use a personal salutation.
3. Introduce yourself.
4. State your purpose for applying to this grad school.
5. Close your cover letter.
6. Enclose requested application documents.
If you are looking forward to check more details, please go to https://www.indeed.com/career-advice/resumes-cover-letters/cover-letter-for-graduate-school.
12月 16, 2020 11:17 下午 #3210Yichen Xin参与者
You can let your professors to help you and finish a project together. Here is a link about application essays. https://writingcenter.unc.edu/tips-and-tools/application-essays/ Yichen Xin
12月 17, 2020 11:06 下午 #3411Janeeue111参与者
12月 18, 2020 12:40 上午 #3466heyue参与者
1. Read the instructions carefully
2. Start with a compelling introduction
3. Use your inner voice
4. Avoid clichés
5. Give good examples to support your ideas
6. Stick to a clear essay plan
7. Ask someone to proofread your work
Find more information through the link: https://www.topuniversities.com/student-info/admissions-advice/how-write-great-college-application-essay
Joyce (Yue He)
1月 19, 2021 12:08 上午 #4937Bill Finance参与者
I’ve just finished business writing last semester and have a communication class this semester. I think in your application essay you need a well-designed attention getter at the beginning, it attracts the administrator’s interest and makes them keep reading. This beginning can talk about your unique personal experience that makes you interested in the major you apply for. Then you need to show your qualification for the graduate program like how you outstanding from other competitors and what you plan to achieve in this program. Application for graduate school is quite similar to applying for a job, but in this case, is how you can make contributions to the academic field and how do you utilize the resource that graduate school can provide you. So showing your eagerness to gain more knowledge and teamwork with professionals is a good way to present yourself. 我上学期刚完成商务写作，这学期有一门沟通课。我认为在你的申请论文中，你需要在一开始有一个精心设计的吸引注意力的东西，吸引管理员的兴趣，让他们继续阅读。这个开头可以讲述你独特的个人经历，让你对申请的专业感兴趣。然后你需要证明你的资格，比如你如何从其他竞争对手中脱颖而出，以及你计划在这个项目中实现什么目标。申请研究生院与找工作很相似，但在这种情况下，你要考虑的是如何在学术领域做出贡献，以及如何利用研究生院提供的资源。所以，表现出你渴望获得更多知识、渴望与专业人士合作的热情是展现自我的好方法。
Bill Finance 2017
1月 23, 2021 7:01 下午 #5253flxs参与者32 pts
Writing an application essay is to show the administrators reasons why they should accept you to enter their graduate program. First, you need to catch their attention to keep them reading. Then, you need to show your strengths and abilities. The whole essay only has one purpose which is to tell them that why they should let you in. You can write about your accomplishments and special experiences that can impress the administrators at once.
1月 24, 2021 11:27 上午 #5319GloTTT参与者
To write a good application essay, you should pay attention to the requirements, such as format, questions, and words limitation. About your content about answers to those questions, you should remember 2 principles. First, make yourself different from other candidates. Second, mention what you can do for the project or related area.
1月 25, 2021 4:12 下午 #5441Charlotte Sun参与者28 pts
1. Read the instructions carefully.
2. They say starting the essay is the hardest part.
3. Start with a compelling introduction.
4. Use your inner voice.
5. Avoid clichés.
6. Give good examples to support your ideas.
7. Stick to a clear essay plan.
8. Ask someone to proofread your work.
3月 8, 2021 11:26 上午 #6523Tanner Shan参与者
When you are writing your application essay, you need to be aware that it is most important that you show where you fit in with the studies you are applying for. You need to show what makes you tick, what you can contribute to the school and what makes the school attractive to you.
4月 18, 2021 9:12 上午 #7396Tracy Song参与者
First, you should carefully read the requirement of essay. Many universities give specific concepts in their websites and even list some guidance to essays. I personally recommend you to design a brief structure and conduct brainstorm. By such way, you can first accumulate some material to use later. Also, you need to search for related program information. For instance, some programs prefer students possess a strong leadership some prefer innovation. Those tendencies may change your personal statement bit by bit. Never put the same essay content or structure for several applications. Also, try to show yourself and tell admission why you are special and what makes you special. It’s true that rich experience or high GPA add grades for you but the process you make it or any difficulty that you overcome definitely make you differentiated. Hope my answer can help. Thank you.
4月 24, 2021 11:20 上午 #7557Amy Shi参与者
Some schools will give applicants a specific topic and ask them to write the essay based on it, and some schools do not give specific theme. Whether the applicant has a specific topic or not, application essays should have the following characteristics. First of all, the essay should be clear in thought and free of grammar or spelling mistakes. Besides, in the application essay, applicants should highlight their strengths and contributions to the university. At the same time, applicants should have a detailed understanding of the program they are applying for and demonstrate their interest in the program. This article shows us how to write an application essay ：how to write application essay
在我们申请学校时，有些大学会给申请者的申请文章一个明确的题目，但有些大学不会给固定的题目。 无论申请者是否获得一个具体的申请文章的题目，申请文章都应当具备以下几个特点：首先应当具有清晰的逻辑和顺序，并且不能有语法或者拼写错误。 并且，申请者应当尽量在文章中突出他们的优点以及能够给学校做出的贡献。 同时，申请者应当对自己申请的项目有详细的了解，并且表现出自己对这个项目的兴趣。
5月 5, 2021 11:07 上午 #7785Evelyn Xia参与者
I think the personal statement is a very important part of the application paper. In the case of us lack of internship experience, personal statement is a very important part of showing personal ability. Therefore, the description of ourselves should be comprehensive. Describe the key content in detail, know more about the specific content of the project you apply for, and try to describe your ability to fit with the project, and simply write that doesn’t fit well. It’s the same for internship experience. Writing internship experience unrelated to the application project in the document may not help the application very well, or even be counterproductive, so let the reviewing teacher see your ability in the applied project. In addition, when you state your reasons for applying for the project, you should control your language attitude, maintain a sincere and confident attitude, and describe your shortcomings to the point. Some schools will give you specific questions and ask you to answer them in the paper. Please read the specific application requirements carefully. The following is a detailed description of personal statement steps and precautions
5月 5, 2021 5:06 下午 #7797Tracy Song参与者
I would like share this video with you. She gives key points while writing a personal statement. For example, you need to greatly show passion towards the program, how your participation helps you form future goal and what can you learn from this program. The personal statement not only is the reflection of your experience or academic performance as an undergraduate but only highlights your traits and well-thinking for the future. Graduate schools are more interested in how their programs can enhance you and how their programs fit your future goals. You need to show your competency in this statement and give them persuasive reasons that they should accept you. Also, more research in programs may help you figure out what types of students that school wants. Meanwhile, your statement may be more attractive while your experience or thoughts fit their tastes. Before submission, you should revise the essay again and again. You can also ask professors for help since they native speakers who can better polish your sentences.
5月 11, 2021 4:33 下午 #7884zhongyating参与者
1、避免名词化：respond就不要说give a response，confirm就不要说make a confirmation。动词本身是有力度的，一旦变成名词，就会失去这种力量感，和读者的关联也会被削弱。
Avoid nominalization: respond don’t give a response, confirm don’t make a confirmation. Verbs are powerful in themselves, but once they become nouns, they lose that sense of power and their connection to the reader is weakened.
2. Delete redundant expressions: Delete 30% of any article will not damage bones and muscles at all. Adverbs are the main thing you cut out. Here I want to show how I helped my good friend modify the PS five or six times to reduce it to half, some sentences are not the whole sentence is unnecessary, but unnecessary modification is very much. Don’t overdo it, really. We’re not writing fiction.
3, pay attention to broken sentences: in English, a sentence is expressed after the end of the period, the connection is really close to the use of compound sentences. Compound sentences can make a sentence more complex and advanced. But be careful, three ties at most, don’t go on and on. In my current classmates, they often make a fault that there are three small sentences in one big sentence, and then one of the small sentences will be repeated in the next big sentence. They are eager to express themselves but fail to present themselves well.
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5月 11, 2021 4:53 下午 #7888LoganY参与者
I think that when you write you need to describe the results of your growth, the influences, not just your growth experience. This is not a narrative essay. Here are some examples: https://www.collegeessayguy.com/blog/college-essay-examples
5月 11, 2021 5:06 下午 #7890LoganY参与者
I think clear formatting is important. If you don’t have a clear format, then chances are that even if you have a rich experience, effective information will not get through to the admissions officer. Here is some information: https://flexcollegeprep.com/college-application-essay-format/
5月 24, 2021 3:12 下午 #8229Poppy0523参与者
I know many students rely on their agency to write application essays for them, which is undesirable. What an agency could do is only modifying it, not construct it. Here is an experience-sharing video of the application essay of LSE that I personally adore. By learning about these, we understand that a perfect application essay does not mean flowery language or skillful format but a sincere heart. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ULA41_VP1_4
5月 29, 2021 5:08 下午 #8610Echo Yao参与者
推荐一个MFE方向可以发的国际期刊，以下是期刊的基本资料：1、Journal of Global Economy, Business and Finance (JGEBF)、期刊属于普通英文学术期刊，全球发行。不属于SCI，SSCI，Ei。可在中国知网（CNKI）检索。3、期刊属于月刊，每个月末出版，下个自然月中旬知网检索并邮件纸质版。比如3月刊，3月30日出版，4月15号左右知网检索并邮寄纸质版。4、流程：投稿，查重，送审，2-4周返回审稿意见，修改正式录用后会发正式录用通知，付版面费，出版，知网检索，邮寄纸质版。
1. Journal of Global Economy, Business and Finance (JGEBF) is a general English academic Journal, which is issued worldwide. Not SCI, SSCI, EI. It can be searched on CNKI.3. The periodical is monthly and will be published at the end of each month. The paper edition will be searched on CNKI and emailed in the middle of the next natural month. For example, the March issue will be published on March 30, and the paper version will be retrieved and mailed on CNKI around April 15.4. Process: Submit the paper, check the copy, submit the paper for review, return the review comments in 2-4 weeks, send the formal offer notice after the revision of the formal offer, pay the layout fee, publish, CNKI search, and mail the paper version.
link for reference: https://www.zhihu.com/question/29373848/answer/157360019
Yao Shuyi (Echo)
5月 31, 2021 5:04 下午 #8751Bumblebee参与者
Does each school have a different essay topic, such as why do you choose this school? Why do you study this major? Describe an experience of failure? Can look for an intermediary to try to embellish additionally.
5月 31, 2021 11:54 下午 #8802
It is necessary to divide knowledge into several subjects, and then set a few sub-topics below each topic, form a clear knowledge system of the context, which is convenient for people to grasp
6月 4, 2021 12:35 下午 #9130.Ticial.参与者
I think you should read someone else’s application essay before writing an application essay. As someone who has never written an application essay, I think there will be many errors in format and language. Therefore, before writing an application essay, learn from others, observe the content, format, and grammar of others, and apply it to your application essay to make your essay look more formal and standardized. Secondly, you need to understand what you are applying for and what requirements it imposes on you. You should mention or highlight these requirements in your application essay. Finally, you can ask your tutor to help you look at your final application essay, and they can provide you with useful revisions
6月 6, 2021 8:27 下午 #9536
From my perspective, it is critical to find a good agency to help you revise your application essay. A good tutor will help you to construct the basic frame of your essay, mainly about how to express your strong passion towards the program, how your participation helps you form the future goal and what can you learn from this program.
6月 6, 2021 8:34 下午 #9541
From my perspective, the tutor who will help you construct the basic frame of the application essay would be extremely important. You should pay more attention about his educational background. In addition, if he has successfully help the students to apply for a famous school which is exactly your dream school, your success rate tends to be higher.
6月 6, 2021 8:46 下午 #9553
Some grammar mistakes must be avoided cuz otherwise they will consider you are not professional, and you have a large possibility that lose the offer. The effective solution is that try to let professors in our university to help you revise. Do not be shy and learn to fully utilize the faculty resource.