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    • #2221 Score: 0
      waqi Winston
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      This handout will help you write and revise the personal statement required by many graduate programs, internships, and special academic programs.
      Link: https://writingcenter.unc.edu/tips-and-tools/application-essays/
      Winston

    • #2990 Score: 0
      Ivy Huang
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      Since the application essay may have a critical impact on your career development, you should spend a lot of time, thought and effort on it, rather than the usual brief proposal. It should reflect how you are achieving your career goals, why the program is ideal for you, and what you bring to the program. Don’t make this a deadline assignment-now is the time to write, read, rewrite, write to a reader, and revise again until the paper is clear, concise, and compelling. Please read this link carefully on how to write better application essays.

      Application Essays


      Ivy Huang

    • #3044 Score: 0
      Jeffery Fu
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      Jeffery Fu

      When we apply for the graduate university, it is a very significant requirements to write an application essay.

      1. Begin by addressing your cover letter.
      2. Use a personal salutation.
      3. Introduce yourself.
      4. State your purpose for applying to this grad school.
      5. Close your cover letter.
      6. Enclose requested application documents.

      If you are looking forward to check more details, please go to https://www.indeed.com/career-advice/resumes-cover-letters/cover-letter-for-graduate-school.

    • #3210 Score: 0
      Yichen Xin
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      You can let your professors to help you and finish a project together. Here is a link about application essays. https://writingcenter.unc.edu/tips-and-tools/application-essays/ Yichen Xin

    • #3411 Score: 0
      Janeeue111
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      申请论文可以先自己写,然后找中介修改。
      Janeeue111

    • #3466 Score: 0
      heyue
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      1.仔细阅读说明
      2.从引人入胜的介绍开始
      3.用内心的声音
      4.避免陈词滥调
      5.给出好的例子来支持你的想法
      6.坚持清晰的论文计划
      7.要求某人校对您的工作
      1. Read the instructions carefully
      2. Start with a compelling introduction
      3. Use your inner voice
      4. Avoid clichés
      5. Give good examples to support your ideas
      6. Stick to a clear essay plan
      7. Ask someone to proofread your work

      Find more information through the link: https://www.topuniversities.com/student-info/admissions-advice/how-write-great-college-application-essay

      Joyce (Yue He)

    • #4937 Score: 0
      Bill Finance
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      I’ve just finished business writing last semester and have a communication class this semester. I think in your application essay you need a well-designed attention getter at the beginning, it attracts the administrator’s interest and makes them keep reading. This beginning can talk about your unique personal experience that makes you interested in the major you apply for. Then you need to show your qualification for the graduate program like how you outstanding from other competitors and what you plan to achieve in this program. Application for graduate school is quite similar to applying for a job, but in this case, is how you can make contributions to the academic field and how do you utilize the resource that graduate school can provide you. So showing your eagerness to gain more knowledge and teamwork with professionals is a good way to present yourself. 我上学期刚完成商务写作,这学期有一门沟通课。我认为在你的申请论文中,你需要在一开始有一个精心设计的吸引注意力的东西,吸引管理员的兴趣,让他们继续阅读。这个开头可以讲述你独特的个人经历,让你对申请的专业感兴趣。然后你需要证明你的资格,比如你如何从其他竞争对手中脱颖而出,以及你计划在这个项目中实现什么目标。申请研究生院与找工作很相似,但在这种情况下,你要考虑的是如何在学术领域做出贡献,以及如何利用研究生院提供的资源。所以,表现出你渴望获得更多知识、渴望与专业人士合作的热情是展现自我的好方法。
      Bill Finance 2017

    • #5253 Score: 0
      flxs
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      32 pts

      Writing an application essay is to show the administrators reasons why they should accept you to enter their graduate program. First, you need to catch their attention to keep them reading. Then, you need to show your strengths and abilities. The whole essay only has one purpose which is to tell them that why they should let you in. You can write about your accomplishments and special experiences that can impress the administrators at once.

      写一篇申请论文是为了向管理员展示他们应该接受你进入他们的研究生项目的理由。首先,你需要吸引他们的注意力,让他们读下去。然后,你需要展示你的优势和能力。整篇论文只有一个目的,就是告诉他们,为什么他们应该让你申请成功。你可以写出你的成就和特殊的经历,让他们印象深刻。

      flxs

    • #5319 Score: 0
      GloTTT
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      To write a good application essay, you should pay attention to the requirements, such as format, questions, and words limitation. About your content about answers to those questions, you should remember 2 principles. First, make yourself different from other candidates. Second, mention what you can do for the project or related area.
      写一篇好的申请论文,你应该注意要求,比如格式、问题和字数限制。关于你的内容关于这些问题的答案,你应该记住两个原则。首先,让自己与众不同。其次,提到你能为这个项目或相关领域做些什么。
      GloTTT

    • #5441 Score: 2
      Charlotte Sun
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      28 pts

      1. Read the instructions carefully.
      2. They say starting the essay is the hardest part.
      3. Start with a compelling introduction.
      4. Use your inner voice.
      5. Avoid clichés.
      6. Give good examples to support your ideas.
      7. Stick to a clear essay plan.
      8. Ask someone to proofread your work.
      1.仔细阅读说明。
      2.他们说开始写论文是最困难的部分。
      3.从引人入胜的介绍开始。
      4.用内心的声音。
      5.避免陈词滥调。
      6.给出好的例子来支持您的想法。
      7.坚持清晰的论文计划。
      8.要求某人校对您的工作。

      https://www.topuniversities.com/student-info/admissions-advice/how-write-great-college-application-essay

      Charlotte Sun

    • #6523 Score: 0
      Tanner Shan
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      When you are writing your application essay, you need to be aware that it is most important that you show where you fit in with the studies you are applying for. You need to show what makes you tick, what you can contribute to the school and what makes the school attractive to you.

      当你在写你的申请文书的时候,你需要注意你要展现你和申请学习相契合的地方,这是最重要的。你要展现出你的特点,你能为学校做的贡献以及学校吸引你的地方。

      Tanner Shan

    • #7396 Score: 0
      Tracy Song
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      First, you should carefully read the requirement of essay. Many universities give specific concepts in their websites and even list some guidance to essays. I personally recommend you to design a brief structure and conduct brainstorm. By such way, you can first accumulate some material to use later. Also, you need to search for related program information. For instance, some programs prefer students possess a strong leadership some prefer innovation. Those tendencies may change your personal statement bit by bit. Never put the same essay content or structure for several applications. Also, try to show yourself and tell admission why you are special and what makes you special. It’s true that rich experience or high GPA add grades for you but the process you make it or any difficulty that you overcome definitely make you differentiated. Hope my answer can help. Thank you.

      首先,你应该在学校官网上仔细阅读文章的的要求。许多大学在他们的网站上给出了具体的问题,甚至列出了一些论文指导。我建议你可以先设计一下思路,多次进行头脑风暴。通过这种方式,你就能积累一些素材和表达的方式。同时,你需要搜索相关项目的信息。例如,一些项目更喜欢学生有领导力的特质,一些项目更喜欢具有创新性的学生。这些不同的倾向可能会改变你的个人陈述。千万不要用相同的文章内容或结申请很多项目。应该在文章中最大程度地展示自己,告诉别人你为什么特别,是什么让你特别。丰富的经验和高的GPA确实会给你加分,但你所经历的过程或你克服的困难会让你更加与众不同。希望我的回答能有所帮助。谢谢!

      Tracy Song

    • #7557 Score: 0
      Amy Shi
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      Some schools will give applicants a specific topic and ask them to write the essay based on it, and some schools do not give specific theme. Whether the applicant has a specific topic or not, application essays should have the following characteristics. First of all, the essay should be clear in thought and free of grammar or spelling mistakes. Besides, in the application essay, applicants should highlight their strengths and contributions to the university. At the same time, applicants should have a detailed understanding of the program they are applying for and demonstrate their interest in the program. This article shows us how to write an application essay :how to write application essay

      在我们申请学校时,有些大学会给申请者的申请文章一个明确的题目,但有些大学不会给固定的题目。 无论申请者是否获得一个具体的申请文章的题目,申请文章都应当具备以下几个特点:首先应当具有清晰的逻辑和顺序,并且不能有语法或者拼写错误。 并且,申请者应当尽量在文章中突出他们的优点以及能够给学校做出的贡献。 同时,申请者应当对自己申请的项目有详细的了解,并且表现出自己对这个项目的兴趣。

      Amy Shi

    • #7785 Score: 0
      Evelyn Xia
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      I think the personal statement is a very important part of the application paper. In the case of us lack of internship experience, personal statement is a very important part of showing personal ability. Therefore, the description of ourselves should be comprehensive. Describe the key content in detail, know more about the specific content of the project you apply for, and try to describe your ability to fit with the project, and simply write that doesn’t fit well. It’s the same for internship experience. Writing internship experience unrelated to the application project in the document may not help the application very well, or even be counterproductive, so let the reviewing teacher see your ability in the applied project. In addition, when you state your reasons for applying for the project, you should control your language attitude, maintain a sincere and confident attitude, and describe your shortcomings to the point. Some schools will give you specific questions and ask you to answer them in the paper. Please read the specific application requirements carefully. The following is a detailed description of personal statement steps and precautions
      https://weibo.com/1776288030/KaBq6tovR?refer_flag=1001030103_&ssl_rnd=1620140642.3099&type=comment#_rnd1620140644015
      我认为个人陈述是申请论文中非常重要的一个部分。在我们本身实习经验不足的情况下,个人陈述是展现个人能力很重要的一块内容。因此描述对于我们自身的描述要全面。详细描写重点内容,多了解自己申请的项目的具体内容,尽量描述自己和项目贴合的能力,不太贴合的部分就简单带过。对于实习经历也是一样的,在文书中写和申请项目毫不相关的实习经历可能不能对申请起到很好的帮助,甚至会起反作用。因此要让审查的老师看到你在申请的项目上的能力。此外,在陈述自己申请项目的理由时,要控制好语言上的态度,保持诚恳自信的态度,中肯的描述自己的缺点。一些学校会给出具体问题要求你在论文中回答,要仔细阅读学校得具体申请要求。
      Evelyn Xia

    • #7797 Score: 0
      Tracy Song
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      I would like share this video with you. She gives key points while writing a personal statement. For example, you need to greatly show passion towards the program, how your participation helps you form future goal and what can you learn from this program. The personal statement not only is the reflection of your experience or academic performance as an undergraduate but only highlights your traits and well-thinking for the future. Graduate schools are more interested in how their programs can enhance you and how their programs fit your future goals. You need to show your competency in this statement and give them persuasive reasons that they should accept you. Also, more research in programs may help you figure out what types of students that school wants. Meanwhile, your statement may be more attractive while your experience or thoughts fit their tastes. Before submission, you should revise the essay again and again. You can also ask professors for help since they native speakers who can better polish your sentences.
      我想要和你分享这个视频,因为里面包含了很多如何写好个人陈述的关键点。比如说,你需要充分展现自己对申请项目的热情,申请这个项目如何帮助你达到目标以及你可以从这个项目中学到什么。个人陈述不仅仅是你大学生活经历的反馈也可以侧面反映出你的性格和对未来的想法。研究生项目需要你提供有说服力的理由让它们接受你,比如这个项目如何能提升你自己以及对口你的未来目标。同时你需要展现自己的竞争力。并且,对申请项目做越多的了解是越好的。因为你可以知道项目需要什么样的学生,这样你的个人陈述可以更好地迎合它们的喜好。在提交之前,你需要多次修改这份个人陈述。你甚至可以找教授帮忙,因为英语是他们的第一语言,能够帮你修改措辞以及表达。

      Tracy Song

    • #7884 Score: 0
      zhongyating
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      1、避免名词化:respond就不要说give a response,confirm就不要说make a confirmation。动词本身是有力度的,一旦变成名词,就会失去这种力量感,和读者的关联也会被削弱。

      2、删除冗余表达:任何文章删掉30%都根本损害不到筋骨。副词是你主要删减的对象。在这里想秀一下我是如何帮我好朋友修改过五六次的PS精简到一半的,有些句子不是整句没必要,而是没必要的修饰特别多。真的不要过度铺垫,我们不是写小说。

      3、注意断句:英文中一句话一个意思表达完了就句号,联系真的比较紧密才用并列句。并列句能使句子变复杂,显得高级。但是要注意,最多3个并列,不要没完没了了。在我目前接触到的几位同学,他们经常会犯的一个毛病是1个大句子里有3个小句子,然后其中1个小句子还会在下一个大句子里重复一遍,表达欲满满却没能把自己展现好。

      Avoid nominalization: respond don’t give a response, confirm don’t make a confirmation. Verbs are powerful in themselves, but once they become nouns, they lose that sense of power and their connection to the reader is weakened.

      2. Delete redundant expressions: Delete 30% of any article will not damage bones and muscles at all. Adverbs are the main thing you cut out. Here I want to show how I helped my good friend modify the PS five or six times to reduce it to half, some sentences are not the whole sentence is unnecessary, but unnecessary modification is very much. Don’t overdo it, really. We’re not writing fiction.

      3, pay attention to broken sentences: in English, a sentence is expressed after the end of the period, the connection is really close to the use of compound sentences. Compound sentences can make a sentence more complex and advanced. But be careful, three ties at most, don’t go on and on. In my current classmates, they often make a fault that there are three small sentences in one big sentence, and then one of the small sentences will be repeated in the next big sentence. They are eager to express themselves but fail to present themselves well.

      [Yating Zhong, Yoyo]

    • #7888 Score: 0
      LoganY
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      我认为写的时候需要描述自己成长的结果、影响因素,而不是单纯描述自己的成长经历。这不是记叙文。这里有一些例子:https://www.collegeessayguy.com/blog/college-essay-examples
      I think that when you write you need to describe the results of your growth, the influences, not just your growth experience. This is not a narrative essay. Here are some examples: https://www.collegeessayguy.com/blog/college-essay-examples

      By LoganY

    • #7890 Score: 0
      LoganY
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      我认为清晰的格式很重要。如果你没有一个清晰的格式,那么你的经历再丰富,有效信息也有可能无法传递到招生官。这里有些信息可以参考:https://flexcollegeprep.com/college-application-essay-format/
      I think clear formatting is important. If you don’t have a clear format, then chances are that even if you have a rich experience, effective information will not get through to the admissions officer. Here is some information: https://flexcollegeprep.com/college-application-essay-format/

      By LoganY

    • #8229 Score: 0
      Poppy0523
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      I know many students rely on their agency to write application essays for them, which is undesirable. What an agency could do is only modifying it, not construct it. Here is an experience-sharing video of the application essay of LSE that I personally adore. By learning about these, we understand that a perfect application essay does not mean flowery language or skillful format but a sincere heart. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ULA41_VP1_4
      Poppy0523
      我知道许多学生依赖他们的代理机构为他们写申请论文,这是不可取的。一个机构所能做的只是修改它,而不是构建它。这是我个人很喜欢的伦敦政治经济学院的文书经验分享视频。通过阅读这些,我们懂得一篇完美的申请论文并不意味着华丽的语言或巧妙的格式,而是一颗真诚的心。

      (Poppy0523)

    • #8610 Score: 0
      Echo Yao
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      推荐一个MFE方向可以发的国际期刊,以下是期刊的基本资料:1、Journal of Global Economy, Business and Finance (JGEBF)、期刊属于普通英文学术期刊,全球发行。不属于SCI,SSCI,Ei。可在中国知网(CNKI)检索。3、期刊属于月刊,每个月末出版,下个自然月中旬知网检索并邮件纸质版。比如3月刊,3月30日出版,4月15号左右知网检索并邮寄纸质版。4、流程:投稿,查重,送审,2-4周返回审稿意见,修改正式录用后会发正式录用通知,付版面费,出版,知网检索,邮寄纸质版。
      1. Journal of Global Economy, Business and Finance (JGEBF) is a general English academic Journal, which is issued worldwide. Not SCI, SSCI, EI. It can be searched on CNKI.3. The periodical is monthly and will be published at the end of each month. The paper edition will be searched on CNKI and emailed in the middle of the next natural month. For example, the March issue will be published on March 30, and the paper version will be retrieved and mailed on CNKI around April 15.4. Process: Submit the paper, check the copy, submit the paper for review, return the review comments in 2-4 weeks, send the formal offer notice after the revision of the formal offer, pay the layout fee, publish, CNKI search, and mail the paper version.
      link for reference: https://www.zhihu.com/question/29373848/answer/157360019
      Yao Shuyi (Echo)

    • #8751 Score: 0
      Bumblebee
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      每个学校有不同的申请论文主题,例如为什么选择这个学校?为什么学习这个专业?描述一段失败的经历?另外可以找中介加以润色。

      Does each school have a different essay topic, such as why do you choose this school? Why do you study this major? Describe an experience of failure? Can look for an intermediary to try to embellish additionally.

      —Bumblebee

    • #8802 Score: 0
      zhang Kaicheng
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      有必要将知识分为几个主题,然后在每个主题下设置几个子主题,形成清晰的上下文知识体系,方便人们掌握。
      It is necessary to divide knowledge into several subjects, and then set a few sub-topics below each topic, form a clear knowledge system of the context, which is convenient for people to grasp

    • #9130 Score: 0
      .Ticial.
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      I think you should read someone else’s application essay before writing an application essay. As someone who has never written an application essay, I think there will be many errors in format and language. Therefore, before writing an application essay, learn from others, observe the content, format, and grammar of others, and apply it to your application essay to make your essay look more formal and standardized. Secondly, you need to understand what you are applying for and what requirements it imposes on you. You should mention or highlight these requirements in your application essay. Finally, you can ask your tutor to help you look at your final application essay, and they can provide you with useful revisions
      我认为你应该在写自己的申请论文之前先阅读别人的申请论文。作为一个从来没有写过申请论文的人来说,我认为肯定会有很多语言和格式的错误。所以在写申请论文之前先借鉴别人的,观察别人的内容,格式以及语法,从而运用到自己的申请论文上让自己的论文看起来更正式规范。其次,你需要了解你申请的内容是什么,它对你自身有什么要求,你应该在申请论文中提到或者突出这些要求。最后,你可以找你的导师帮助你看看你最后的申请论文,他们可以提供给你有用的修改意见。

      Ticial

    • #9536 Score: 0
      alangong
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      From my perspective, it is critical to find a good agency to help you revise your application essay. A good tutor will help you to construct the basic frame of your essay, mainly about how to express your strong passion towards the program, how your participation helps you form the future goal and what can you learn from this program.
      在我看来,找一个好的中介来帮你修改申请论文是很关键的。一个好的导师会帮助你构建你的文章的基本框架,主要是关于如何表达你对这个项目的强烈热情,你的参与如何帮助你形成未来的目标,以及你能从这个项目中学到什么。
      Alan

    • #9541 Score: 0
      alangong
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      From my perspective, the tutor who will help you construct the basic frame of the application essay would be extremely important. You should pay more attention about his educational background. In addition, if he has successfully help the students to apply for a famous school which is exactly your dream school, your success rate tends to be higher.
      在我看来,帮助你构建申请论文的基本框架的导师是非常重要的。你应该多注意他的教育背景。另外,如果他成功地帮助学生申请到了一所你梦想的名校,你的成功率就会更高。

      Alan

    • #9553 Score: 0
      alangong
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      Some grammar mistakes must be avoided cuz otherwise they will consider you are not professional, and you have a large possibility that lose the offer. The effective solution is that try to let professors in our university to help you revise. Do not be shy and learn to fully utilize the faculty resource.
      一些语法错误必须避免,否则他们会认为你不够专业,你很有可能会失去这份工作。有效的解决办法是让我们大学的教授帮你修改。不要害羞,要学会充分利用教师资源。
      Alan

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